small things found on the path
Such a sad image. Lost, maybe, tainted no.
This is meant to be the message from the fluttering ribbon, not from me!It brings up an interesting point. I could have written "I am lost and tainted, it seems to say", or something like that. It reads better, stronger, without. But obviously it's not clear enough. These exercises in very brief writing really make you confront these choices.
No, have the courage not to add the disclaimer, it is better without and it's very important that we don't have to over-protect each other from worry or offence like that.
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